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  • In 1999 as a prompt from a writer's magazine competition, I wrote this and sent it off to a competition. The story had to be titled 'The Season' and conclude within a certain amount of words. To my utter surprise Foreword Monthly Writer's Magazine chose it as their first prize and I won £250.

  • The editor wrote that they had had a huge response to the competition and I was quite chuffed because these entries were all from writers and would-be writers. The editor commented about the winning entry: "Well written, expressive and uplifting with occasional flashes of humour. The Season by Michael Clifford is this month's winner; a really enjoyable read. Well done to the nine runners up...".

THE SEASON

Gradually, May rambled into June, and rambling was how Lana and Jerry met.

The late snowfall had melted and the bleating of newly born lambs had faded. Diehard bluebells sapphired the woodlands as buttercups gilded the meadows. In the village gardens, daffodils had given way to pansies, forget me knots, blazing baskets of fuchsia, all parading within the dreamy spray of rosebud scent.

Turned-on clocks created an English scenery of light nights and vowed days without end.

   Lana, an English art teacher had read ‘A Brief History Of Time'. Jerry, an American physicist, had a daughter who wanted to be a sculptor. So they found - as they made footprints together around the common - they already had something in common.

   She liked him. She wrote that evening in her diary: ‘It is a time to reveal and a time to withhold, a time to reach out and a time to hold back’. In the next week, struggling with these paradoxes, she joined him on a canal walk and a museum visit.

   Then came blistering July: blue sky, white clouds, blue lake, white swans. Feeding white crumbs to orange beaks, Jerry and Lana told each other of their lives. "All was devoured," Lana later wrote in her diary. "The ripeness of our own understanding of who we are, now shared." The Marchwind loneliness of each other’s divorce became touchable to the other, as the long shadows of a Constable painting cocooned them in the warm yellow evening of the solstice.

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